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Post by PIKACHEW ❤ on Nov 17, 2010 21:02:05 GMT -5
PENDINGSo I really have no idea what you're doing with this application. First off, there's something fucked up with the images, because all i'm seeing is [image] three times in a row. Second, the second post should include the six pokemon they both carry around (which means three each).
Your personalities are repetitive and hard to follow. Your grammar and poor word-choice makes both the positive and negative sections very choppy and not-flowing - not to mention, it gives little outlook on their personalities at all. It would also be rather beneficial to elaborate (a lot) on the likes, dislikes, and fears. 'Bug Pokemon' is not the only fear they have, I'm sure. And Team Rocket, bad people, and evil people all sort of fall under the same one category: bad people. As for hobbies? You really need more than one.
Lastly, their trainer class is "Twins" which means at the top where you have put "Lass" needs to match. That should, also, be all uppercase, otherwise it looks rather like shit.
Fix, and I'll see where we stand, acceptance-wise (:
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